邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety Since 2010, several campus violence happened, which shocked all the country, and caused a deep thinking in the society: How can we prevent the campus violence and protect students from hurt. However, the ordinary security methods should be strengthened. Firstly, the distinguishment of the vistor's identity should be strengthened, to make sure strangers can't get into the campus without permision. Secendly, there should be security guards hanging around the campus, sepecially during the night. Lastly, the security education of students should be strengthened too. For our students, the most important thing to do is to be aware of how to protect ourselves and how to keep away from danger.