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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6619
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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How to improve school safety Since 2010, several campus violence happened, which shocked all the country, and caused a deep thinking in the society: How can we prevent the campus violence and protect students from hurt. However, the ordinary security methods should be strengthened. Firstly, the distinguishment of the visitor's identity should be strengthened, to make sure strangers can't get into the campus without permission. Secendly, there should be security guards hanging around the campus, specially during the night. Lastly, the security education of students should be strengthened too. For our students, the most important thing to do is to be aware of how to protect ourselves and how to keep away from danger.

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