2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；连词使用偏少。

Witf the improvement of economy ,people pursue a higher quality of life.So if yuo come to a shop to buy a present you can find that there are a variety of excessive packaging . Some people think that a ablosute gift need to doculate,so they package it with all kinds of coloful paper.In my opinion on excessive packaging is very wasetful,it is bad for environment .Our government should appeal people gainst with excessive packaging in order to reduce environment pollution. I hope we can deal with this problem together.