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I have a dream.It's teacher.Why?Because it is very interusting. He hava stature vevry much.The teacher must be stature follow the school rules.The stature can learn books.I love childes .So,I can make friends with they.Are you?After scholl,I can do we homework with they.Next,I can read lots of books.Last,they can play.In Sunday ,I can play sport with they. May all me wishes come true.Are you?I can May all your wishes come tue.