七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam get out at six am yesterday. then,he is very happy. he is eat food at McDonald's with parents.afternoon ,he is play basketball with classes at school,they play till six pm Sam with father go for a walk at night .his father buy a music CD for him.Yesterday, Sam is very interesting!