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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11033
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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If you ask me that what's my favorite sport,my answer will be football definitely. One day,an ordinary day,I went home as usually,then a football suddenly entered into my sight.I picked it up and bring it home,after that,I played it with my friends.Maybe it was an amazing ball,maybe it was an amazing day,I cannot explain, but since that I fall in love with the football.And all these changes totally because I picked a football by chance. Probably,the football will accompany me in my rest life,I think.My favorite sports star is Beckham,who is excellent in playing football.To be a professional football player is my biggest desire.So I often join the training and the game with my classmates to make my desire come true early.

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