初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

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I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. One day, I have a friend on the internet. My friend name's Bella. She comed from The Unitrd States. She is very friendly. We are talk about the favorite movie, the school life, the hobby. She is knowledgeable. And I have problem can ask her. So I learnt a lot from him.