初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. One day, I have a friend on the internet. My friend name's Bella. She comes from The Unitrd States. She is very friendly. We talk about the favorite movie, the school life, the hobby. She is knowledgeable. And I have problem can ask her. So I learnt a lot from him.