初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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Do you know the South China tiger are in danger? If you don't know,let me tell you why they are in danger rightnow.First of all,There are too much hunting in the world.Second,there is fewer and fewer Nature Reserve to protect them.And the basic Nature Reserve is Baishanzu Nature Reserve.But in the past, There are very few tiger.so far,there are about 30-60. What should we do for them? How can we protect them better ? I think we should less and less hunting and protect the environment better so that them can live safely,What do you think?