初中英语命题作文真题演练(94):良师益友

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

In our life, there is a teacher who always gives me a hand whenever I am in difficulty. She is just like a bright light in the dark , which leads me to the right direction. when I was in junior high school, my family so poor that I once wanted to give up my study. therefore, one day, I chose not to go to school. But my historical teacher, my headmaster,called me everywhere. Finally , she found me and enlighten me patiently that only if I studied hard and went to college, i could change my fate. so be courageous, and stick to my dream, I would be successful.After listening to her words, I worked harder and I was admitted to a ideal university at last. At this time, I want to show my thanks to my teacher. Thanks to your encouragement, I realize my dream. without you , without me.