初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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South China tiger is one of the animals most in danger. There are only 30-60 South China tigers living in the world now. Why are they in great danger? Because people cut lots of trees down, destroying their homes. But the main reason is too much hunting. So there were very few South China tigers in the past. Our government is working hard to save them. There are some nature reserves to protect them, and the most important one is Baishanzu National Nature Reserve, in Zhejiang. Animals are our friends, so we must protect them (from being hunted). Also, we should build more and bigger nature reserves to make South China tigers feel themselves live in nature.