2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(12):本校食堂

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Every thing has two sides,not expect our canteen. there are also many advantages and disadvantages in our canteen. Like,the food in our school is very delicious and clean.But,the price in it is very high.Since we are still students,we can afford it.We sincerely hope that the price can be cut down.Besides,i want to say good to taste of food in our canteen.It's very delicious.But,the sorts of food is too little.If it possibly for you,would you increase the sorts of it.There is one thing i must to give a praise to.That is the service in our canteen let us feel at home.But the time we are waiting costs to much.Hoping that the efficiency in our canteen can have a great improve and you can receive my advice.Best wishes to our canteen.