初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My Dream What do I want to do when I'm older? Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children. I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano. I play the piano when I'm ten years old.Now I'm in grand five.I hope when I'm sixteen years old , I can become grand eight.I'll be harder and harder to practise. Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.