作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;请注意分段。
In our daily life, it's usual whether you win or not, as long as you keep a good attitude towards it . Don't be elated by victory, nor distubed by failure. one day , you will succeed. I experienced many exams through my life. some win while others not. For example , when I was in junior high school, every time I took an English exam, I always failed. But I never gave up learning English as I had a determined heart. When I felt frustrated, I always thought of an old saying which says failure is the mother of success. Therefore, I worked harder at studing English. At last, when I took the university entrance exam, I got a good grade. So, having a good attitude is a key to success.