2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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New many parents love their children in a way that they will do everything they can to do for their kids.Such as they help kids to clean their bedroom and wash the clothes and so on.Besides they are oppose to their children do something they suppose insignificant.So many children always depend on their parents and it is absolute bad for children to be independent. Parents plays an important rold in helping cheildren to be independent.So,in order to help children to develop thire independent parents should let children do something by themselives and tell them the importent of being independent.Besides,teaching them how to deal with problems by themselives.