高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

Walking is my faorite sport now. Previously, I like that more intense antagonism sports such as football, basketball, volleyball and so on. These exercise not only makes me have a strong physique, but also strengthened my will. And I practiced every day after school. Recently I walking after lunch and dinner, it will spent me half an hour. At this time I'm tired of the brain and the body will get be relaxationed thoroughly. Sports taught me the importance of cooperation in a team. Sports also taught me the importance of discipline and tenacity and the sence of accomplishment you get from going the extra mile.