高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。

Walking is my favorite sport now. Previously, I like that fierce antagonism sport such as football, basketball, volleyball and so on. These exercises not only makes me have a strong physique, but also strengthened my will. And I practiced every day after school. Recently I walking after lunch and dinner, it spent me half an hour. At this time I'm tired brain and the body will get be relaxed thoroughly. Sports taught me the importance of cooperation in a team. Sports also taught me the importance of discipline and tenacity and the sense of accomplishment you get from going the extra mile.