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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
I am a teenager now. In my life I meet too many people. They are so kind that I never forget them, especially Mr. Zhang, a math teacher. When I studied at primary school, I was not good at math. I hated math, so I always slept on Mr. Zhang's class and never passed the exam. While to my surprise, the teacher didn't hate me because of this. He encouraged me and told me the importance of study. As a student, I was very impressed by his action and his words. Since then I tried my best to learn everything and made lots of progress. Mr. Zhang is a teacher who lives simples life. He isn't special at all. But he is the most important people in my life. I thank Mr. Zhang. I give my best withes to him and I really want to say “Thank you, my dear teacher. I love you forever.”
