正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Sam got up six o'clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by bicycle. He have a good fun in the park. He had lunch with his parents at noon. Sam played the basketball with his classmates from the 4 to 6 o'clock in the afternoon. After super, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classfic CD for him. How fun it was.