七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam get up on 6 oclock yesterday. Then he ride bike to park, he has a good time at park. He has lunch in McDonald's. Sam plays basketball with his classmate from 4 oclock till 6 oclock this afternoon. After dinner, Sam go for a walk with his father, his father buy a class music CD to him. Sam has a funny day!