七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam gets up on 6 o'clock yesterday. Then he ride bike to park, he has a good time at park. He has lunch in McDonald's. Sam plays basketball with his classmate from 4 o'clock till 6 o'clock this afternoon. After dinner, Sam go for a walk with his father, his father buy a class music CD to him. Sam has a funny day!