高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football,which is one of my hobbies.And my favorite soccer player is Bake Hame.I love playing football by chance.Once upon a time,I pick up a soccer on my way home,and then I played it with my classmates,and from then on,I deeply fell in love with the soccer.One of my biggest dream is to be a professional football player one day.