七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误；结构不严谨，行文不流畅；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6a.m. yesterday. Then he went to the Park by riding bikecycle and had a good time.He had lunch with his parents in the McDonald noon.He played basketball with his classmates in the school afternoot.After dinner time,he took a walk with his father.His father bought him a CD of classical music.How interesting the day was.