七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Yesterday,sam got up at 6 o'clock.Then he went to the park by bike,where he had a good time.When it came to the noon,he had lunch with his parents in McDonald’s.Sam is fond of doing sports so as to exercise himself .Therefore ,he played basketball with his classmates from 4 o'clock to 6 o'clock.Then ,sam accompanied with his father going for a walk.What made sam so happy is that a CD about classific music was given by his father .It was the CD that he had asked for for a long time . What a funny day today!