高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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hi,nice to meet your .I'm miss liang .nanjing lie eastsouth in china .It's jiangsu proviance .the people about 5 million. nanjing have 2400 year history ,once had ten county in the here. nanjing is very beautiful and many framous place ,such as ,xuanwu leak ,jimingshi ,toen cultury.there are many mondren frity and high house . welcome to nanjing .