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2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(07)写作:青少年饮食

发布时间:2013-10-18 17:48浏览次数:709
要求:
青少年饮食是影响民族人口素质的重要因素,但是目前部分青少年的饮食状况令人担忧。请你根据下面提供的要点,写一篇题为"Teenagers need healthy eating"的英文演讲稿,准备参加学生会组织的英语演讲活动。
要点:
1. Eat snacks or other unhealthy food
2. Take in(摄入) either too little or too much nutrition(营养) every day
3. Go to school without breakfast
注意:
1. 对所给要点,可做适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 


Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is "Teenagers need healthy eating".
Healthy eating is very important to us teenagers. However, 
 
 That's all. Thank you for listening!
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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part of us students don't have healthy eating habits,some like to have snakes,some don't like to have breakfast in the morning,some like to have a lot of junk food,and still some take in either too much or too little nutrition . But as we all know,these lead bad to our health.Some may cause high heart peassure and other diseases,some may make us become too fat or too thin.On the other hand,we are what we eat.So we should have more fruits and vegetables and less meat to form a healthy eating habit. In my opinion,we teenagers should try our best to build up a healthy eating habits. Let's keep a healthy eating habit!If we do these,our life will be better.

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