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Pen pal wanted My name is Lucy King.Iˊm thirteen years old.Iˊm from the UK.I like do sports.I also like music.I often sing some English song.I like watching movies.I know about a lot of China.Because I like China very much.I want to find a Chinese pen pal.She is a girl.I also want to learn from her Chinese.Had better have the same interests and hobbies.
