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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:52浏览次数:3224
要求:
学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力
骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便
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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle
There are basically two ways to go to school.
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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With the development of economy,the transportation become faster and faster and today we live with a fast-spaced life style.So in some people's view,going to school by bus is better than by bicycle because it can not only save time but also save strength.But some people are reverse,they are accustomed to going to school by bicycle.Because they believe it is an good opportunity for them to do some exercise.The important is it is extremely convenience. In my opinion,going to school by bicycle is beneficial to our health,sometimes it can reduce traffic jams.So compared with the way going to school by bus I would rather like by bicycle.

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