初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

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My Net Friend This is my net friend.He name is Tom.He is 13 years old.He is from the Unite States.But he is living Beijing.He likes pandas very much. Because they are very curt.He very like to play the piano.And he likes to play the guitar very much.He also draw very well.He is my net friend.He is a good boy.