七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

sam got up at 6:00 yesterday,he is rides a bike go to the park,he has a good time,he and parents eat McDonald's lunch.sam and classmate plays basketball in the afternoon,from at 4 pm till 6 pm ,after dinner sam and father go fo walk,father bought CD for he,sam have enjoy good day.