七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

A fun day Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.Then,he went to park by bike,he had a good time.At afternoon,he had lunch with his parents in the McDonald's.He play basketball with his classmates at school,four p.m till six p.m. After lunch ,Sam went for a walk with his father,his father bought a traditional musical CD for him. Sam had so interested a day!