邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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The violence which frequently happened on campus in recent years greatly shocked us.It's essential for us to improve the school safety. To prevent the school violence,the first thing is that everyone on campus should be aware of the harm of it and say no to it.If you meet the situation,don't be afraid and tell the teacher or parents in the first time.Second,learning how to protect yourself is an important thing.As for the school,the security guard must be more strict as it's most effective measures to keep the students from people who do harm to the society. Making the school be a quiet and beautiful place require us taking these actions right now.