初中英语命题作文真题演练(94):良师益友

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

I have met a lot of good teachers and good friends.Thanks to their help, I could have enough courage and knowledge to deal with the challenges in my life. Now I'd like to tell something about my best friend Lucy.It was a month before the P.E. exam.I practiced hard because it makes up 30 percent of the final exam and I was not good at P.E. She encouraged me and practice with me everyday.In fact,she was already able to pass the eaxm and didn't need to do so.Unluckily ,I got injured 10 days before the exam.I was so sad and even couldn't fall asleep.Lucy worried about me a lot .She cheer me up and packed my leg with herbal medicine everyday.At last I got better miraculously and was able to pass the exam. Without her help I couldn't imagine what will happened next.When I am running or jumping I always remember her help. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thank you Lucy,I will miss you forever and I will learn to be a kind person like you.