若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量。
Our house There is a big house which is located in the hill. This is a whate wall and bull roof house.In the house, there have a living room. three bed room and a wash room. I like my house very much, because it is the heaven of my family. except the buliding, there also have a garden and a pool, I can plant the flowers in the garden and swining in the pool with my family. I love our house, I love my family.