雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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The graph shows us the specific information of what kind of fast food youngsters prefer in America. And it's easy to notice that hamaburgers, pizza and french fries account for the major part of their options. As can be seen from the pie char, hamburgers, representing 33% of fast food preferences in the USA, is the largest par of it. Pizza and fren fries come the second and the third, with 26% and 22% respectively. It is surprising to find that these three kind of food have accounted for more than 80% of their choices of fast food. In contrast, other fast food like fried chicken, tacos and suchi only make up for the tiny part of their preferences, with 9%，7% and 3% respectively. Therefore, based on the above analysis, it's not hard for us to draw the conclusion that the most popular fast food in USA is hamburger.