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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3576
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

The graph shows us the specific information of what kind of fast food youngsters prefer in America. And it's easy to notice that hamburgers, pizza and french fries account for the major parts of their options. As can be seen from the pie chart, hamburgers, representing 33% of fast food preferences in the USA, is the largest part of it. Pizza and french fries come the second and the third, with 26% and 22% respectively. It is amazing to find that these three kind of food have accounted for more than 80% of their choices of fast food. In contrast, other fast food like fried chicken, tacos and sushi only make up for the tiny part of their preferences, with 9%,7% and 3% respectively. Therefore, based on the above analysis, it's not hard for us to draw the conclusion that the most popular fast food in USA is hamburger.

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