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Our life is composed of success and failure.You may not succeed all the time as you may not fail.While ,as we all know,failure is the mother of success. From the point of my view,taking a positive and correct attitude towards failure is the moat significant step on the way to success.First,to bravely face the failure.Failure is just the process of succeed,from which we can absorb the previous experience and find the mistakes we made.Second, don't be negative when having difficulty.It is obvious that every meets failures.So there is no sense for yo