拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Our life is composed of success and failure.You may not succeed all the time as you may not fail.While ,as we all know,failure is the mother of success. From the point of my view,taking a positive and correct attitude towards failure is the moat significant step on the way to success.First,to bravely face the failure.Failure is just the process of succeed,from which we can absorb the previous experience and find the mistakes we made.Second, don't be negative when having difficulty.It is obvious that every meets failures.So there is no sense in worrying about it.Otherwise,you may lose confidence. Success is an admission to your efforts.But you must stick to work hard and not be over proud.What should be beard in mind is that pride come before a fall.