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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Our life is composed of success and failure.You may not succeed all the time as you may not fail.While,as we all know,failure is the mother of success. From the point of my view,taking a positive and correct attitude towards failure is the moat significant step on the way to success.First,to bravely face the failure.Failure is just the process of succeed,from which we can absorb the previous experience and find the mistakes we made.Second, don't be negative when having difficulty.It is obvious that everyone meets failures.So there is no sense in worrying about it.Otherwise,you may lose confidence. Success is an confirmation to your efforts.But you must stick to work hard and not be over proud.What should be beard in mind is that pride comes before a fall.
