高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Playing football is my favorite hobby. I fall in love with football by chance because I picked up a football on the way to home.Having played it with my friends together,I deeply loved football.I as well as classmates often train and compte together.For me, Backham is my favorite football player star in English.It is a big dream to become a professional football players in my life.I hope my dream come true!