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Our monitor He is our monitor.He joined into our class since the new semester.His name is lilei.He is thirteen year old.he is taller than other boys in our class.his height is 1.5cm.he have a round face and the high bridge of the nose.he have a pair of big eyes.the color of blue is he most likes.so he wear a suit of bule soprtclothes in most time.he likes sports so he always wears a pair of white sportshoes.our monitor study very hard and he is willing to help others.we love our monitor.