湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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Our Monitor My monitor is Tom.He is a smart boy.Now,he is 13 years old.First of all,he looks like a English.He is tall with short black hair.And he has a pair of big eyes.He usually wears white T-shirt,jeans in blue and red sportshoes.He has good grades,he is very good at English.He likes it ,too. Now ,do you know him?