七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏小，另外文章有些单词拼写错误；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

An Interesting Day Yesterday,Sam gets up at six o'clock.Then he rides a bike to park,he plays in the park happily.At noon,he has lunch in Mc Donald's with his parents.After that,he plays basktball from four o'clock to six o'clock in the afternoon with his classmates in school.Sam with his father are go for a walk,his father buy a Music CD for him.How is a interesting day!