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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
My hometown is Fuyang.It's beautiful.The air is so clean ,the sky is blue.It's warm in spring.It's hot in summer .It's cool in the fall.It's cold in winter. It's summer now.The weather is hot .some people are swimming.some children are eating ice cream and drink juice with ice. In the evening ,people like to eat out .In summer vacation,children often stay at home play computer games.That was very nice.
