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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
It's winter here now. The weather is windy and cold. People are wearing coats and scarves. But everyone is having a good time. Friends are eating or drinking in the restaurants. In the park, some young people are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. One man is taking some photos. How happy they are!
