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My Busy Day I have a busy day tomorrow.I gets up at six o'clock.Then i have a good breakfaet.After that i have a shower.Just now,a phone ringing up,it's my frend Mona. "Hi,Nancy." "Oh,hello." "Do you know where is Kitty?" "Yeah,she's studying in her frend home." You are taking the matter too much to heart