七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

He gets up in the six clock yesterday, he was extremely happily in the park. In the afternoon,he eats some food in the Mai dang Lao , In the evening, he plays basketball with your friends at the school till in the six clock,after dinner, Sam go for a walk with your father, his father bought a CD.