七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

He gets up in the six clock yesterday, he was extremely happily in the park. In the afternoon,he eats some food in the McDonald's ,and In the evening, he plays basketball with your friends at the school till in the six clock,after dinner, Sam go for a walk with your father, his father bought a CD.