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Tom should get up at 6:00 every morning.He should go to school at 6:15 every day.He doesn't eat outside and doesn't listen to music on school days.He shouldn't watch TV on school nights.He is go back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.This is Tom's rules.