单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Tom shoulders get up at 6:00 every morning.He should go to school at 6:15 every day.He doesn't eat outside.Except,doesn't listen to music on school.Besides,He shouldn't watch TV on school nights.What's more,He is going back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.So this is Tom's rules.